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“It’s not giving up. This technique will be easier for you to learn. Who knows, maybe you’ll figure something out if you take a break.” Jiraiya told his student. Jiraiya then attempted to fold his map, eventually giving up when it wouldn’t fold back into its original shape. He stuck it into his pack before turning to face Naruto. “Okay this is a wind technique so you should pick it up easily. It’s called Fuuton: Suko-ru. If you do nothing but put chakra straight into the attack it creates a blast of wind that can push back enemies or allies without hurting them. If you spin the chakra before putting it into the technique it’ll create a small tornado that can do minimal damage but will put a good distance between the enemy and you. The more chakra you put into the attack the stronger and more powerful the wind is, got it?”

He then performed three seals and shouted out the name of the attack directing a blast of wind at a nearby tree causing the leaves to be stripped off the branches. “Alright now you try.”

“Right!” Flipping through the seals Naruto shouted, “Fuuton: Suko-ru!” Instead of a burst of wind like Jiraiya created, a large tornado formed and began ripping up trees as it made its way through the forest. The tornado dissipated once it got about two hundred feet away, leaving Naruto and Jiraiya to stare at the destruction.

“You might want to try putting less chakra in it,” Jiraiya stated calmly, his eyes surveying the tornado’s path.

“A lot less.”

An Alternative Path, Chapter 6